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Rainbow Roxy's avatar

Love this perspective. The imagery is so sharp and the feeling of disillusionment really comes through. This comunicates so much, I totally agree.

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Morgan A.Drake's avatar

Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a comment. (This is one of my most read, and least reviewed, pieces 😏🔥). I loved writing this, it’s good to know it reached someone.

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Ed the Cozy Editor's avatar

My quads are killing me after this one 🥵. Making the fallen angel fee what human agony is like? Cruel ecstasy.

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Morgan A.Drake's avatar

😏😏😏🔥🔥🔥

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Hylia Corvidae's avatar

Oh I kept starting this and pausing and forgetting and I’m glad I finally read it

A lot more emotion than I was initially expecting, but wow what an intense dynamic that comes together so nicely in the end with seeking out human experience

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Morgan A.Drake's avatar

I hope the end result was balanced enough to result satisfactory… I honestly wasn’t sure myself of what would come out of it, when I started writing.

The only thing I knew was that I wanted to give him something he wouldn’t otherwise have.

… not an easy goal with a Devil.

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Molly Moblo Perusse's avatar

What in the actual hell…? Can I just keep reading? Riveting.

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Morgan A.Drake's avatar

Hell is subjective… especially in this instance.

And there’s more coming. 😏

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Molly Moblo Perusse's avatar

Noted. It’s all so subjective. But what a gift you’re sharing.

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Morgan A.Drake's avatar

Thanks 💙 I honestly wasn’t sure about the reception this specific story would garner. Next one in the series will be a Christmas gift. 😏

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Kelly Xan's avatar

This left me SPEECHLESS. I certainly put down my coffee while reading it. I felt the agony, the want; I felt all of it. My knees hurt in solidarity by the end, but there was also a heaviness in it; it was not just agony for agony's sake. This will stay with me for a hot minute.

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Morgan A.Drake's avatar

I hoped you’d like it. I was waiting for this.

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RM Greta's avatar

I don't think the consent thing is an issue since he definitely chose to stay there hah.

This was excellent. I love the idea of punishing the devil with human feelings.

🔥🔥🔥

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Morgan A.Drake's avatar

I was being a bit tongue-in-cheeck about that. It's not necessarily about the sex, more about the 'intrusive thoughts'.

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RM Greta's avatar

Ahhh ok. Yes…

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